The Erotic Fiction Author Rejoins the Continuation of His Beloved Story

The comments section of the erotic fiction story was filled with a mix of praise and criticism. Some readers were eager to see the continuation of the story, while others pointed out grammatical errors and suggested improvements.

Lovetotouchit wrote, “I would like to read the rest of the story are you going to finish? Because it would be a real shame not to.”

Chpeterson3 chimed in, “We’re can I find the book the return.”

Anonymous reader 1 expressed frustration, “I hope I can find part II and III and IV.”

Thejohnnyrotten offered praise, “Love your writing. Remember reading this before, see you have made changes because of the new age rules. Still see some grammar editing problems. Would be glad to help if you need it. Would love to read more of your stories. This site needs to keep as many of the great writers as it can.”

Anonymous reader 2 wrote, “A good story, except for one thing, I am a prolific reader and remember good stories that I have read before, this was written and posted over a year ago by a writer with a different name, are you that writer with a different name, or did you, borrow the story?

Brootforce responded, “My books are available as listed. The Return by Sean M. Campbell. The Return II & III by Sean Campbell. (The publisher dropped my middle initial without permission.) Saving Mouse by Sean M. Campbell. Comming soon. MERC By Sean M. Campbell (Non-Erotic tale.) For Love Of A God By Sean M. Campbell (Romance with very mild sex scenes.).”

Anonymous reader 3 wrote, “Good stuff!! Keep up the great work!!”

Anonymous reader 4 expressed interest in the next installment, “When will ‘the return 2′ be available. The farthest point I ever read was when Rhys became the new ’emperor’. I thought the storyline was great and I would like to be able to read it again.”

Anonymous reader 5 wrote, “Just bought and read all your books from Abby……… Just FUCKING AMAZING.”

Anonymous reader 6 exclaimed, “FUCKING EPIC….MORE DAM IT MORE…..YOU HAD ME BY MY BALLS SO TO SPEAK IT WAS AMAZING LOL CANT WAIT WRITE A BOOK PLEASR.”

Norton5 praised the writing, “This is a great first chapter. Love the two animal companions and the human form of Likka is soooo hott!! I envy the fact that you thought of the power to heal rapidly via strong emotions. Wish I had thought of that and written a story about it first! Awesome!”

Anonymous reader 7 wrote, “hey,it’s David again…. wish i had known i wouldn’t get the chance to read the rest of this story.. i’d of never started reading it if i had. so frustrating.”

Anonymous reader 8 suggested improvements, “re spelling,, just 4 that i picked out,,,correct spelling first,, thanks not thanx /\/\/\/\/curiousity\/\/\/curiosity\/\/\/\/\/ I before E except after C, great reading so far,, i wish you great success.”

Anonymous reader 9 wrote, “very nice piece of work…check the spelling though and it will get even better.”

Anonymous reader 10 expressed frustration, “your publisher is going to fuck you like you fucked us.”

Anonymous reader 11 wrote, “I wish you luck broot. I will forsure be trying to get it in paperback.”

Anonymous reader 12 wrote, “I. My openion I don’t lil how hes telling story I like stories like present.”

WantSumCandyLittleGirl praised the writing, “Great style in the writing, only criticism is more an observation as I’m guilty of the same thing – using the wrong word or spelling. Can’t wait to get through the rest. You should also re-post the series into a thread on the forum. You’ll get a lot of feedback from the writers who don’t hit the story site.”

Wolf_Knight offered advice, “I posted the previous message Broot, wanted you to know it wasn’t anonymous. I got logged out in the time I took to read slowly. I normally read to fast to truly enjoy what I’m reading but you asked for reviews and advise so I’ll give them to you.”

Anonymous reader 13 wrote, “Great style in the writing, only criticism is more an observation as I’m guilty of the same thing – using the wrong word or spelling. Can’t wait to get through the rest. You should also re-post the series into a thread on the forum. You’ll get a lot of feedback from the writers who don’t hit the story site.”

Anonymous reader 14 wrote, “Needs mo o dem Double d’s if ya know wha I meayn”

Anonymous reader 15 wrote, “Only guys are leaving their numbers…. Watch out for chuck Norris”

Anonymous reader 16 expressed concern, “Me gusta yum yum yum that guy rob steely sounds creepy. Nobody needs to know that someone molests kids I think that actually is illegal so basically that person just made themselves open to possibly be arrested.”

Anonymous reader 17 wrote, “A couple spelling mistakes but not enough to stop me enjoying the story.”

The comments section was filled with praise and suggestions for improvement, a testament to the power of a well-crafted erotic tale. “Mann, that was one helluva story!” exclaimed one enthusiastic reader.

“I was turned on from the very beginning,” gushed another, “but now I just wish that the physical world was as fantastical as your story.” The sentiment was echoed by many, who couldn’t help but feel a pang of longing for the world of magic and wonder that they had just experienced.

“Thanks for the great story!” chimed in another reader, “And yes, please keep it up, I’m looking forward to reading more!” The comments continued, with readers expressing their love for the story and their hope for more to come.

“You’re a talented writer,” said one reader, “Please continue with the story, I’m hooked!” Another reader praised the author’s use of language, saying “I love the way you weave words together to create a sense of wonder and magic.”

But not everyone was pleased. “Poorly written,” complained one reader, “Many misspelled words, poor grammar and bad punctuation. Please have your stories proof-read and edited by someone more educated than you before submitting any more.” The critique was met with a gentle rebuke from another reader, who said “I don’t think that’s fair, the story is great and the minor errors don’t detract from it.”

One reader was particularly taken with the story’s themes of love and relationships. “I love the way you’ve developed the characters and their connections with each other,” they said. “The sex scenes are hot and steamy, but they’re also tender and intimate.”

“I have a suggestion though,” said another reader, “Lose the softcore terms like ‘her womanhood’ and ‘my manhood’. Being explicit with most of a sex scene and repeatedly shifting back and forth with softcore descriptions was very distracting.” The author took note of the suggestion, and continued to write, incorporating more explicit language into their scenes.

“I loved the story and do hope you are going to follow this story on with a part 2,” said one reader, and many others echoed their sentiment. The author smiled, knowing that they had created something special, and that people were eagerly awaiting more.

“Write more!” exclaimed one reader, “A lot more! Great story!” And with that, the author set to work on the next chapter, eager to see where their characters would go next.

The comments section was a treasure trove of feedback and support for the erotic fiction story. One reader, who had clearly been following the story from the start, expressed their enthusiasm, saying:

“I would like to read the rest of the story, are you going to finish? Because it would be a real shame not to.”

Another reader, perhaps a bit more cryptically, asked:

“We’re can I find the book the return.”

It seemed that some readers had lost track of the story, and were eager to continue following the author’s narrative. One reader, who had clearly been following the story from the start, exclaimed:

“I HOPE I CAN FIND PART II AND III AND IV”

Another reader, who seemed to be a fan of the author’s work, offered some words of encouragement:

“Love your writing. Remember reading this before, see you have made changes because of the new age rules. Still see some grammar editing problems. Would be glad to help if you need it. Would love to read more of your stories. This site needs to keep as many of the great writers as it can.”

However, one reader’s comment raised some eyebrows:

“A good story, except for one thing, I am a prolific reader and remember good stories that I have read before, this was written and posted over a year ago by a writer with a different name, ARE YOU THAT WRITER WITH A DIFFERENT NAME, or did you, BORROW the story?”