critique

  • The Author’s Dilemma – A Writer’s Quest for Intimacy

    ByAdmin

    Randy MacAnus’ erotic story had sparked a heated debate among readers. Some praised his writing skills, while others criticized the abrupt ending and lack of detail in the sex scenes. Randy, I think you have great potential as a writer, but the sex was a bit too abrupt for me,’ said one reader. I couldn’t…

  • My Erotic Novel Creator vs The Critic

    ByAdmin

    Emily’s eyes narrowed as she skimmed through the comments, her mind still reeling from the events that had transpired in the latest chapter of her erotic novel. Her protagonist, Alex, had finally outsmarted his cheating girlfriend, Sarah, and was now on the verge of exposing her deceit to the world. “You did it again, Mr….