My Relationship Role Models: Constructive Feedback for Part II

The comments section was filled with reactions from readers who had been captivated by the story of Ron, Jenny, and Janice. One reader, who wished to remain anonymous, exclaimed, “I would love to find someone like that to be mine all the time! HOT, HOT, HOTTEST! A good juicy cum.”

Another reader, bigdaddyg123, praised the writing, stating, “This story is very much better written, in every aspect, than Parts I and II of ‘I Have A Dick And A Pussy’.” They expressed their hope that Part II would not introduce new characters, but rather focus on the existing ones, saying, “Hopefully Part II of this story will not include any additional characters!!”

This reader also offered constructive criticism, suggesting that the story could benefit from more detailed descriptions of the characters and settings. They noted that the scenes were often cut short and ended abruptly, saying, “Many times the scenes are short-circuited and finish abruptly (suddenly)!!”

Despite these criticisms, the reader praised the clarity and ease with which the characters interacted with each other, saying, “This chapter is thorough with the clarity of normal-sexed Ron and Jenny in relation to hermaphrodite Janice; they are all at ease with each other.”

Another reader, Cheryl, chimed in with her thoughts, saying, “OMG That is really small!! I would not fuck that. I would rather fuck a nice well hung guy any day over you.” She compared her current husband’s size to the character’s, saying, “My current hubby is 9.5 inches and super thick and heavy.”

Happy Rabbit praised the story, saying, “This is a Great Story, i am really enjoying it as this is one of my favorite subjects.” They noted that this situation was often accepted in certain cultures, saying, “You see this situation mostly in the 3rd World and in Hawaii. Often it is just accepted. What is, is.”

They also touched on the topic of medical intervention, saying, “In the U.S the knifes would be flashing in the first few months to correct the problem. Never a thought given to what if there is No Problem.”

Finally, anonymous reader thoughtfully concluded, “I think all the other commets are spot on. Also we need more like this ,but not the same.”