My Critic as a Reader

The comments section was filled with a mix of praise and criticism. Some readers praised the story, calling it “hot and sexy” and “one of the best on here.” They appreciated the way the author had woven the characters’ interactions together to create a sense of realism.

However, others were more critical. They felt that the story had lost its charm, and that the introduction of Tiff had been too obvious. One reader commented that it seemed like Tiff and Jen had been intimate before, which didn’t align with the rest of the plot.

Another reader expressed disappointment at the direction the story had taken. “I didn’t like the fact that he fucked Jen’s best friend and that too in front of her,” they wrote. “There is some contradiction popping up in the characters.”

Despite the criticism, many readers were still enjoying the story and looking forward to the next chapter. “Superb,” one reader wrote. “I’m always looking forward to the next chapters. Keep it up.”

One reader even suggested that the author should turn the story into a book. “You are a true writer,” they wrote. “An excellent story line, and the characters interaction is great.”

However, not everyone was pleased with the direction the story had taken. “The story has lost its charm, try a new story line!” one reader advised.

“If he would fuck Jen’s best friend when Jen was there,” another reader pointed out, “why is it so hard for him to tell Jen about Beth?” They felt that the character’s actions didn’t align with their personality.

Despite the mixed reactions, the author remained committed to their story. They continued to post new chapters, each one building on the previous one to create a rich and complex narrative.

“Your story is one of the best on here,” friendlyman53 wrote. “You are a true writer, an excellent story line, and the characters interaction is great.”

“Wow, Wow, Wow!!! Worth the wait,” Samantha16 exclaimed. “You write a fantastic story.”

“Superb,” anonymous reader wrote. “I’m always looking forward to the next chapters. Keep it up.”

“I agree, story lost it’s charm,” another reader echoed. “I didn’t like the fact that he fucked Jen’s best friend and that too in front of her.”

As the comments continued to pour in, it was clear that the author’s story was a topic of much discussion and debate. While some readers loved the direction the story had taken, others felt that it had lost its way.

The comments section was filled with opinions and reactions to the story. One reader couldn’t help but express their thoughts on the situation.

“How would you feel if you were a cum shot and you were being wasted?” the reader wrote, sparking a string of responses.

“Excellent story, just read all of them in order, bravo great job,” another reader chimed in, offering praise.

“Finally someone who can write a story first, then add the sex,” a third reader wrote, commending the author’s approach.

“Best series on here, hands down,” a fourth reader exclaimed, expressing their enthusiasm for the story.

“You should make a book out of this, I have read far worse in my years,” another reader suggested, offering their support.

“Great job, buddy, the story just keeps getting better and better, keep it up,” a reader wrote, offering encouragement.

However, not everyone was pleased with the direction the story was taking.

“I realize that things ‘happen in life,’ but this three-some seems like it shouldn’t have happened,” a reader wrote, expressing their disappointment.

“I think it’s too early to get a very close friend involved in the mix,” the reader added, questioning the timing.

Another reader was disappointed in the character development.

“If he doesn’t like even talking about their sex life and gets embarrassed by it, how can he go from being a shy one-woman man to showing no embarrassment and fingering them and eating them out?” the reader asked, pointing out a contradiction.

“Has it just evolved into fiction and every man’s fantasy?” the reader wondered, expressing their concerns.