Community Responses to a Poor School English Article

The comments section was filled with a mix of praise and constructive criticism.

Anonymous reader 1 chimed in, “Good read! The fool commentator should make some kids of his own if he wants to teach H. school English.” Their comment was met with laughter and a few eye-rolls from the community.

Anonymous reader 2 took a more serious tone, “Please try to learn a few of the rules for writing. First, the first letter of the first word in any sentence should be capitalized. Second, when you use the word ‘I’ in a sentence, it should be capitalized. Third, the first letter of a person’s name should be capitalized. And fourth, always proof-read your story carefully before submitting it for publication.”

Anonymous reader 3 was a bit more enthusiastic, exclaiming, “That Was A Good Story! And I Like It!”

Tdragon142, a self-proclaimed expert, claimed, “I ment 4 3/4 inch cock.”

Another anonymous reader shared a rather…unsettling experience, “When I was thirteen, I went to my aunt’s house to stay while my room at home was decorated. She had a friend, Sue, who was also staying with her, along with Sue’s son, Mark. My aunt and Sue were…close, and it seemed okay to have Mark in my bed. I’d been having sex since I was eleven, and I loved it.”

“It was a disaster,” the reader continued. “He’d cum on my belly as he was getting into bed, and then again on my back when he snuggled up to me. In the morning, he’d cum on my legs when we touched each other, and again in the shower.”

The reader confessed, “I had four days of this, and not a single…you know. I forgot to mention that he’d cum on the bed sheets when I was masturbating, and then when I made him feel my…sensitive areas.”

To this day, the reader admitted, “I don’t know what became of him or if he ever did manage to get into a girl without cumming on it first. But in fairness, I’ve never seen anyone produce as much cum as he did.”

A final anonymous reader offered some encouragement, “A good start! Keep writing. Reminds me of when I was in high school. Would love to see where it went after that…”