Carl’s Sister-in-Law’s Dilemma

Carl Lincoln Jr.’s latest story received praise from a fellow reader.

“I loved reading your side of the experience,” she wrote. “We seldom see the woman’s point-of-view – just what the guy wants it to be.”

Another reader, though, was less impressed with the language used in the story.

“béléhi ki tal9a tofla t7ébek 7ébha,” they began, their words a jumbled mix of Arabic and French. “I wish you’d use more slang, more explicit words. It would make the story even more appealing.”

A third reader chimed in, their comment a simple yet enthusiastic “Just as enjoyable as chapter #1. More chapters please.”

And yet another reader expressed their disappointment with the story’s restraint.

“Interesting to see Kay’s perspective,” they wrote. “I will state that the reserve and restraint in your vulgarity is disconcerting. I like to hear the words Pussy and twat, add in dick, hardon, cunt lips etc.”

But amidst the criticism and praise, one thing was certain: Carl Lincoln Jr.’s story had sparked a lively discussion.

“Make it even more appealing by keeping the Queen in the closet so to speak.” – Chevy Van

“Just as enjoyable as chapter #1. More chapters please.” – Anonymous reader