Author’s Sibling Love Story Draws Unfounded Outrage

As I read through the comments on my story, I couldn’t help but feel a sense of unease. One commenter, “Lynnoliver,” seemed to take great offense to the content of my story, calling out the readers as pedophiles and suggesting that we’re not capable of understanding the value of good literature.

“People are so quick to condemn while hiding behind an ‘Anonymous Reader’ tag,” Lynnoliver wrote. “This isn’t ‘Anna Karenina’ nor is our friend here pretending to be Tolstoy. ‘Respect for the readers’ you mean the bunch of dudes sitting naked at a computer and jacking off to stories bout Sister fucking?!”

But I couldn’t help but feel a sense of vindication when another commenter, “Anonymous Reader,” jumped to my defense. “Ma non guardate la forma,” they wrote. “È la sostanza che conta.” The translation was clear: “Don’t judge the form. It’s the substance that counts.” And what I was trying to convey in my story was a raw, unbridled passion between two siblings.

“Qui c’è una fica di 15 anni calda e vogliosa che viole cazzo e solo cazzo,” the commenter continued. “C’è il suo fratellino che avrà il cazzo ancora mignon, ma crescerà intanto si fottono e godono, La vita è così breve.” It was a testament to the power of human desire, and the way it can bring people together in the most unexpected ways.

But not everyone was as understanding. “Anonymous Reader” wrote that my story needed a total rewrite, and that it was a waste of time to read. “SHOW SOME PRIDE IN YOUR WORK AND A LOT OF RESPECT FOR THE READERS AND ALWAYS USE A GOOD EDITOR AND MAKE SURE IT IS DONE PROPERLY BEFORE POSTING,” they scolded.

“IF YOU ARE WRITING FOR YOURSELF THAT IS FINE BUT DON’T POST IT IF YOU ARE WRITING FOR THE READERS MAKE DAM SURE IT IS DONE PROPERLY OR DON’T POST IT AT ALL,” they continued. It was a harsh criticism, but one that I couldn’t deny.

But as I read through the comments, I couldn’t help but feel a sense of gratitude to the readers who had taken the time to share their thoughts with me. “Pretty good, for a first draft,” one commenter wrote. “Really needs to be edited.”

“Needs a total rewrite and a good editor,” another commenter agreed. “The paragraphs just keep getting longer and longer. Total waste of time trying to read this, this is a first draft only and should not have been posted. Remove it and do it right.”

But despite the criticism, I knew that I had created something special. A raw, unbridled passion between two siblings, a testament to the power of human desire. And as I read through the comments, I knew that I had made the right decision in sharing my story with the world.

“I think it was a great story, well written and kept me reading,” one commenter wrote. “Thanks for a very good story, and I hope there are more.”

“Not bad,” another commenter agreed. “I have no real complaints about it.”

As I finished reading the comments, I knew that I had made a difference. I had created something that had touched the hearts and minds of my readers, and for that, I was grateful.